Crazymonkey154's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[I LOVE THE INTERNET]

Sorry, but this just isn't very good. The only audio heard is "Damn, Daniel". Only hearing that over and over again gets too repetitive. The character shown isn't even seen doing much aside from crying blood. At least make the character have more reactions, whether it's a change in facial expressions, making a comment on what's being played on the laptop, or both. Try making something with more action.

GenerallyBananas responds:

Thanks for the review. I understand it is very bare, I was finding the Damn Daniel video quite annoying and wanted to express that, and I haven't had a finished project to release in a while so I made this as a quick thing. My other projects have a lot more going on, I'm just nowhere near finishing any of them. Thanks again and I hope it doesn't sound too much like I'm making excuses

[Madness Abreaction]

Warning: Improbability Drive can lead to danger!

In all seriousness, it was cool to see how your custom character came to be. I look forward to more of his adventures.

Gibb50 responds:

One day, Jack complete his wish and destroy all of the AAHW

[Incident:002A]

You must belong to creepy face or die! Good work, but why didn't we see what creepy face guy does after leaving the room?

Kelzad responds:

Because I didn't have an idea on what to do after that. I also worked hard as fuck on the last scene to get it out on time.

[The Ice Cream hunt]

The title is misleading; there isn't exactly a "hunt" for ice cream if a character is simply exiting a car to go to an ice cream stand. Decent movements, but no coherence. For example, why don't we at least find out what flavor was ordered? Why did the character temporarily disappear after falling on the ground?? I can't vote higher than a 1 on this given the flaws it has.

HoobaAnimations responds:

I'm terribly sorry that this one had as many flaws that it actually had... But as said I only had a decent amount of skill and time to put into this animation.
I will certainly use these advice, (even if it were negative critique). To make something better for you viewers.

[Incident:001G]

Not bad. Like Djjaner said, could be sped up a bit, but otherwise pretty good job. On another note, any particular reason why the main character kept changing appearances?

Ghost-Kewell responds:

Because of Madness!~

[Madness 2 Scene Test]

Sorry, but this isn't up to par. Movements are too slow, so 12 FPS is discouraged. I personally recommend 30 FPS, but this should AT BARE MINIMUM be 24 FPS. The walking also looks awkward. Try doing simply one foot at a time as the "gallop" (the method I think you were trying to use) is hard to pull off and didn't work well here.

[Project: Infected Collab]

Very nice, always wanted to see a theme within a collab!

Eshio responds:

Thank you :)

[Madness Hotdogfication]

Not bad. Felt a bit short, though. There was also one glitch where the hotdog man picks up a machine gun and it seems to duplicate (one in hands, one on the ground). One thing I definitely recommend working on is the kickback aka recoil for guns. You seem to be using one general type of recoil for all types of guns. For SMG's, assault rifles, and especially machine guns, it should be quicker as they can fire rather rapidly. For shotguns, it went back a good amount but should go a bit less up, and the character should take a step or two backwards when firing. What you used here can be used for pistols. Overall, keep up the good work.

juanford66 responds:

thanks for the review :)

[Madness Pizdation]

Very nicely made. Just wish it was somewhat longer! Loved the ending, too :3

GrabeL168 responds:

thanks man!

[Madness SWAT]

Very well done, Spaderz. I loved how you used Crash Bandicoot: Wrath of Cortex music in this. My favorite game in the franchise would have to be either that or Crash Nitro Kart. Since the three main characters each had audio for their dialogue, the other characters should have as well, though. Sorry you couldn't finish this in time for MD2013, but still epic!

Spaderz responds:

hey thanks man, yeah it really fitted with this animation lol, crash bandicoot wrath of cortex was one of my favorites aswell. especially Crash bandicoot Warped :D, haven't seen you in awhile man but thanks for the review :)